The Stone Wall at Tagamore Swamp

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The Stone Wall at Tagamore Swamp

Postby supertoad » Fri Nov 27, 2009 3:17 pm

I wrote this poem a couple weeks ago:

No tame trail leads one there
Through wild rye and tangled brier,
Over paths unworn,
To the old stone wall
That weathers all.
A remnant of lost triumph;
The artifact of forgotten struggle.
When leaves ate wood
And thatch wore to soil,
Crops to seed,
And stock to feral,
It stood there still:
The old stone wall
That weathers all.
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Re: The Stone Wall at Tagamore Swamp

Postby Goombachi » Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:06 pm

I could never write poetry this well. Well done.
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Re: The Stone Wall at Tagamore Swamp

Postby Narudog » Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:54 am

Excellent, wrote well.
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